在历年高考中，书面表达一直是让同学们觉得最为困扰的部分，虽说写作难，但却也是有规律可循的，近几年全国卷作文的文体几乎都是以书信形式出现，只不过话题内容各不相同。今天，继续为同学们分享书信体——祝贺信该怎么写？
祝信的内容
祝贺事由(录取，升迁，获胜，成绩……
祝贺语
对方所取得成绩的主客观原因
相关的看法和建议
鼓励、赞扬、祝福
祝贺信的功能句
1. It is delightful for me to know that you are admitted/offered/promoted/have achieved …
2．I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your promotion/ admission/success/victory/winning …
3．As your close friend, I am more than glad to share your …
4．It is beyond words how pleased I am at your …
5．I can well imagine how proud of you your parents are, who have been anxiously hoping to witness your …
6．In my view, you are always a talented … with abundant/excellent … and completely deserve the …
7．This … is a reward that you richly deserve.
8．After years of assiduous study and hard work, you have reached this milestone in your scholarship, which is a really great achievement you can be well proud of.
9．I am sure, you will make progress and obtain even greater achievement …
10．I wish you greater success in … and I am looking forward to …
11．I hope that the coming year(s) will bring you a further increase in …
写作任务
假定你是李华，最近你收到你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已经被剑桥大学(the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺。
内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 谈谈你对他所取得的成绩的看法；
3. 祝福。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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审 题
体裁：祝贺信
人称：第二人称为主
时态：现在时，过去时，将来时
要点：1. 祝贺
2. 看法
3. 祝福
谋 篇
Part one：写作背景(被录取)+写作目的(要点一：表示祝贺)
Part two：谈谈看法(要点二--拓展)
Part three：再次祝贺+祝福(要点三)
扩 展 要 点
要点一：祝贺你被剑桥大学录取
I am writing to offer my sincerest ___________ __________ your ______________ into the University of Cambridge.
要点二：看法
1. 作为你的朋友，我特别高兴分享你的成就，我的骄傲之情无以言表。
As your close friend, I am more than glad to _______ your ________ with you and it is __________ words how ________ I am of you.
2. 在我看来，你值得今天的一切成就，因为你是那么的勤奋，聪慧，博学多才。
In my view, this _________ is a reward that you richly ________ because you are always __________ and ____________ with _________ __________.
3. 剑桥大学是很多学子的梦想学校，在那里你会结识更多优秀的人。
The University of Cambridge is the ________ _______ for countless students, where you can learn from the ___________ professors and are accompanied by the ____________ peers.
要点三：祝愿你未来取得更大的成就，期待着你更多的好消息。
I wish you greater _________ in the future and I am looking forward to more ______________ from you.
祝贺信模板
Dear Jacob,
It is delightful for me to know that you are _____________. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your _____________.
As your close friend, I am more than glad to share your _____________ and it is beyond words how proud I am of you. In my view, _____________ is a reward that you richly deserve because you are always diligent and intelligent with abundant knowledge in many fields. _____________ is the dream _____________ for _____________, where you can learn from _____________.
I wish you greater achievement in the future and I am looking forward to more good news from you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
高分范文
Dear Jacob,
It is delightful for me to know that you are admitted into the University of Cambridge. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into it.
As your close friend, I am more than glad to share your achievement with you and it is beyond words how proud I am of you. In my view, this admission is a reward that you richly deserve because you are always diligent and intelligent with abundant knowledge in many fields. The University of Cambridge is the dream university for countless students, where you can learn from the top professors and are accompanied by the most excellent peers.
I wish you greater achievement in the future and I am looking forward to more good news from you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua