On one Saturday,Mr Smith went fishing on a clear day. Unluckily,he caught nothing.When considering that her wife would laugh at him,he had to have a fish in order to save the face.
When passing by the fish shop,he came up with an idea that I can buy a fish for my wife.
On his way home ,he thought that she would be happy when his wife saw the fish.
Mr Smith was unlucky.He get a frozen fish from the fish shop,but he didin't know it.Giving his wife the fish,he was abused by his wife.The reason is simple. The fish is a frozen one.How he could get a frozen fish from the river.That's obviously impossible.
Then Mr Smith knows that Saving the face is a bad idea.Not only can it waste much money,but also it can't save the face anyway.
我又对文章做了以下的改动。
1，增添了买到冻鱼的经过，故事不显的的太唐突
2，化一个复合句为短句，因为之前文章符合句过多。
3，增添了一句议论，点出了要面子的危害。
4，词数扩充到了150词。
5,用了have ,get ,a bad idea,更符合英语规范，更有英语的味道。
希望楼主随便采纳我的100字或150字的文章，都可以，楼主加分啊。
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