以蜡烛为题的化学作文？？？
蜡炬成灰泪始干
求助，一篇英语作文，李华王林的实验，蜡烛的那种。急！！
1,例文 ：Hi,I am li Hua.On sunday's morning,after I haveing breakfast,I remembered the homework which was assigned by my physics teacher.So I quicklly start to concentrate on the homework.The homework is a small experiment.To my surprise ,my friend Wang Lin came when I was doing the experiment.So we start to do it together.
Frist,we put a candle on a piate full of water.
Second,we set fire to the candle and it burned for a while.
Third,we use a glass to cover the candle which was burning.
Finally,we observed that the water in the glass was rising when the candle went off.
We fast recorded the while process.Then,we make a coincident conclusion!
How happy a sunday!
2，方法技巧：首先把行文过程思考好，尽量多添加细节，特别是自己日常生活的细节，如心情，作息习惯，动作表情，事情的起因，经过，结果，影响。。。从而使内容充实！
3，心得：根据我多年的写作经验，积累了一些写作技巧和你交流，仅作参考！我总结出，作文尽量要写长一点,虽然有的老师说作文写的太长，会扣分，但是长作文的起始分大多数都是高分，即20分以上，（当然除了抄写前面的阅读理解！）就算再扣也是扣1,2分，还是高分！如果平时练的时候就写短的，那考试时就更写不出长的！况且，短作文只有写的简练整洁才有可能得高分，但高分一般很少，大多数都在18分以下，所以长作文再扣分也是高分，有相对的优势！
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