一、大英四级作文，求英语高手看一下
首先写的很不错，希望你能坚持下去。有些不足，我说说我的想法吧。四级考试判卷老师可能会注意你每个段落的开头，比如说你的开头引用了一个类似As a proverb goes...是个很精彩的加分点，非常不错，文章整体思路很好，可能有些语句要学着去加工。比如说最后一段的开头 总的来说To sum up,没有错误，但换句话说In general... 全文
二、谁能给我介绍几篇今年英语四级的热点作文范例？
4. Air Pollution
Air pollution is one of the major problems of the modern world. A great deal of energy is needed to run the factories of modern industrial nations. Automobile, trains, planes and busses need energy, too. Nearly all of this energy is produced by burning fuels. The burning produces wastes, some of which remain in the air, causing air pollution.
Scientists are finding ways to stop air pollution especially in big industrial areas and densely-populated cities. They are studying new ways of generating electricity that may be less damaging to the environment. In the meantime, many power plants are being modernized to give off less polluted material. Also, engineers try to design and locate new power plants to do minimum damage to the environment.
However, it may be that we still have a long way to go before we have a clean world. Nearly all of the countries are trying hard to prevent and control air pollution. There indeed seems to be no end to tasks that environmentalists will be required to do. People will continually find new ways to control pollution.
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